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    (I wrote this as a intro for an RP of mine, explaining the backstory of one my characters, it doesn't end there, but the rest isn't that good... But I am proud of this part so I wanted to share. What do you guys think of it?)

    Mother, why do you cry?
    Everything is going to be alright.
    Why is everyone around me? Cousin, what’s wrong?
    Everything is going to be alright.
    Why is everyone crying?
    Everything is going to be alright.
    Why are they saying we have to leave? Isn’t this our house? What are debts? Mother, please tell me what’s happening. Father, please, don’t make us leave. Aunt, uncle, please stop crying. Cousin, help me!
    Everything is going to be alright.
    Where are we going? Why is this rope around my neck?
    Everything is going to be alright.
    Mother, father, please save me! I don’t want to do this.
    Everything is going to be alright.
    We can sell the castle! I don’t want it! We don’t need to do this!
    Everything is going to be alright.
    SNAP!
    Uncle? Your… your feet aren’t touching the floor…
    SNAP!
    Aunt?
    Everything is going-
    SNAP!
    Cousin?
    -to be alright.
    No! Let go of me! No! I don’t want to do this! Please! Please! Please! I don’t want to die, I’m too young! Please! Mother! Father! Please, don’t jump!
    Everything is going to be alright!
    SNAP!
    DAD!
    Everything is going to be-
    SNAP!
    MOM!
    No! The floor is closing in! No! I’m only five! I have so much to live! Please! No! Please, don’t do this to me! I don’t want to die! No! No! No! N-
    SNAP!
    THUMP!
    When I finally opened my eyes, I was not dead. The corpses of my family hanged above me, my mother still holding my hand, with even more strength as she did when she was alive, just moments ago.
    The rope had snapped, and I had been saved because of that. But what now?
    ???: Hey! That’s my spot!
    I stopped staring at the river in front of me and looked back to see who the kid that decided to interrupt my flashback was.
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