• 7 years ago
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    A fragmented and common story, we can almost notice the author's strings as he's making it up, and it doesn't feel natural. Some elements are missing; there's not a single explanation of the protagonist's powers and origins, We don't know a thing about the Nth Metal (except that they name it a hundred times) and we don't even have a clue of who the secondary characters are. It wasn't especially bad, but it wasn't captivating either.
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    • MasterCrash
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      MasterCrash
      Editing … I just got home from work and I was super confused, I was honestly thinking to myself "What the fuck? When did I wrote this? What IS even this? What the fuck?" and then I realized it was Sha
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    • Husky Wing
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      Husky Wing
      Editing … I read your comment and thought "is someone else using Crash's account?"
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    • Silent Gamer
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      Silent Gamer
      Editing … I straight up thought it was Crash that wrote this :/
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    • Sha Ember
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      Sha Ember
      Editing … I changed back my pseudo but not my avatar, sorry. xD
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Created 2015-09-30 06:58 pm
Page creator Sha Ember
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