• 7 years ago
    Saved!
    Probably my best promo Roleplay:
    http://ukwfefed.proboards.com/post/1362

    Got them tag team titles with it :D

    (Yeah, I'm aware yall don't care)
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  • 9 years ago
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    So, I wrote up a char for a wrestling RP thingy, and this is her intro, if you guys wouldn't mind, I'd like some feedback. Her gimmick is that she wants to be a supervillain, and she's also extra insane, but she's also very adorable:
    "This particular scene starts inside what seems to be a bizarre lab. It’s too dark to make much of it, but you can clearly see a woman leaning on a table. On top of that table was what looked like an open, bloody mannequin. She talks with a deep British accent

    CARNIVAL: Igor. Oh, Igor… Those people are so cruel to you. They call you... “heartless”. They don’t seem to understand that you, in fact, don’t have a heart. But that’s alright… it is! You see, Igor, I’m going to give you a heart!

    She jumps around to a desk full of jars.

    CARNIVAL: Liver, liver, brain, another liver… why do I have so many of these? Hum… Oh, Igor, it seems I don’t have a heart to give you. But it’s okay, a lung will do. Sure, yeah, I know, I know. You won’t have blood pumping out your body, and you can’t bleed for that extra scary effect. BUT! But… you can smoke! I mean… it’s hard to have cancer in all three lungs. Unless you’re my uncle, he had cancer in all his four lungs.

    It is at this point that she looks right at the camera for the first time, and she seems extremely surprised by the existence of such thing. She gets closer to the mannequin’s head.

    CARNIVAL: Igor! Igor! What is this? What’s a cameraman doing in my secret lab? I mean, it’s secret for a reason, it’s not on google maps. At least not until the new version hits the market. What, Igor? HKW? Oh, right… right… Never heard of that. Oh! Oh! The wrestling thing. Yeah, yeah, you’re right, you have a great memory Igor. That’s what I like about you, you’re basically a brain! I’ll give you the other organs eventually, I promise, no need to keep complaining… Jeez…

    CARNIVAL:And you? What am I supposed to do? Address the people in HKW? Fine. Hello people of HK Wrestling. W Is for wrestling, right? Ah, who cares? My name is Carnival and I am your next overlord. So… you can start worshiping and stuff. Bring signs to the ring if you’re a follower. I’m pretty merciful against followers, I’ll give them cake before I kill them. And no, the cake is not a lie, it’s actually a strawberry cake, really good. Family recipe.

    CARNIVAL: And I bet you’re wondering how I’m planning to become your next overlord. The answer is simple. I’ve been researching the place and I’m aware there’s a thing called “Championship Titles” that for some weird reason its belts. Now, what I plan to do is to, in a very Pokemonish style, collect them all. Yes, I am aware that there’s something called “Tag Team Titles”, but I’ll just catch them both alone. I have two shoulders after all. Now, I know what you’re thinking. “But, Carnival, how can you carry all the titles by yourself?” I’ll just try to fit them all in my waist. If I can’t, since I’m a bit small, what I’ll do is that I’ll just grow another shoulder, in my back. And I can make that shoulder long enough to fit all the titles. So… yeah, that’s it. What are you still doing here? Leave! Bye bye!

    The scene fades to black."
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E-Fed Wrestling
E-Wrestling
Wrestling Roleplay

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